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Title: More

Written For: lily100
Words: 100
Challenge: Envy


Lily brought James home one summer, when she was sixteen.
Petunia was reading in the living room when they arrived; somehow without scattering ash across the place and looking immaculate to boot.

“Good afternoon, don’t suppose you’d care for a spot of tea?” Because she really needed a cup, or six.

“You must be Petunia?” Sirius had just arrived. He addressed her like she was some sort of sea cucumber.
And he was hot.
When she came back with the tea they were all talking about that marvelous magic.
The three of them, they were so, close, so… much more.

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On August 29th, 2006 10:51 am (UTC), coming_clean001 commented:
Awwwwwwwwww, that's really sweet. And sad. I like seeing a different side to Petunia. Nice work.
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On August 30th, 2006 04:02 am (UTC), evelynlela replied:
Thanks, although it's not really different, I think she did envy her sister
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On September 15th, 2006 07:02 am (UTC), merihn commented:
That was good... shows the cliquiness of school friends.
Its hard to write in only a hundred words.. very hard and you did a good job.
♥ Alex
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On September 15th, 2006 08:00 am (UTC), evelynlela replied:
Oh it took me ages to work out how... ages in which I was terribly jealous of all who could.
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On September 15th, 2006 08:39 am (UTC), merihn replied:
Yeah, I bet it did... I wrote a really short fic... in a fit of angst and it was actually pretty good... to restrain myself to a really small amount of words and see what I could do with it.
It was good. You worked it out well.
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